Jazzy
Getting the Hang of it
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Post by Jazzy on Aug 21, 2005 3:37:28 GMT -5
The Storm
A gentle wind caresses my face As I watch distant lightning flash I let my mind wander to a place With reflections of the past
The storm brings back happy times Of things I've seen and done But it also shows me sadder times Of fights and battles that nobody won
The storm holds for me Many stories and tales In each raindrop I can see Different victories and fails
All of a sudden the storm cloud bursts I sit and watch as the rain falls hard I drift off and remember all my firsts Like the first time I rode a bike in the yard
A crack of thunder brings be back to the here and now I notice how the rain has lightened I sit and try to understand how When storms used to come I'd be frightened
I get up from my seat to go back inside Things are now returning to the calm clear norm I smile and let my arms drop to my sides I look to the sky and say "Thanks for the memories hidden in the storm"
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Post by Sam on Aug 21, 2005 3:49:37 GMT -5
Dear God...that was amazing. Bravo. I love it.
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Jazzy
Getting the Hang of it
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Post by Jazzy on Aug 21, 2005 3:53:10 GMT -5
awwww thankies!
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Post by Sam on Aug 21, 2005 4:00:49 GMT -5
np
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adi
Brand Spankin New
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Post by adi on Oct 13, 2005 1:57:22 GMT -5
Dear Wormy, The poem titled 'The Storm' is a wonderful piece of poetry. It is probably one of the best poems I have heard. I, oneday, hope to write poetry like you. Congratulations, you have 1 new fan. (thumbs up)
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